Thesis statement approved.....!!

After, reconstruct and rewrite the sentences, I have my thesis statement approved by Miss Siti. It’s great because until thesis statement not settles, I couldn’t proceed with everything. It’s good that we have Miss Siti to assist us in writing our position paper. Now, I learnt that a good thesis statement should not be in a question form and shouldn’t shows a relationship of cause and effect because you’ll tend to have both sided in mind and unable to justify your stand. Now that thesis statement ready, my next task is to design an outline of what I want to put in my position paper… Adios…!