Position paper.....

I have prepared outline for my position paper. Altogether, I have four points to support my stand on ‘Edna’s desire for freedom is the reasons for her irrational acts’. An outline to writing a position paper is important as it will determine the flow of the writing process and redirecting us from losing our main purpose of writing the paper. But, still, I felt something missing from this outline… I couldn’t figure out what is it…?? Help…. me!! I think I need to get second person point of view about this... Yes... Chui Kiang……. (She’s wonderful, like to share idea….) I’ll let you know when my outline ready... alright!