Redrafting....

I knew it…!! Remember I told you about something missing in my outline? Definitely, it does… Lucky me, I managed to asked Chui Kiang’s opinion about my outline. She corrected me on two points which she thinks need to be more powerful and the arrangement of my topic sentences. I redrafting my outline and showed it to Miss Siti… Well, she approved and like my last point! See… It’s nice to have other people point of view especially in writing because you never know what other might react or respond to our ideas. The same thing goes in communication. Something we need to look and aware of other people feelings about what we think or feel is right may not be alright to others… J Letting others to comment are actually the best way to learn form making mistakes…! Gracias…!!!!!

Submission of position paper.....

Wow…!! Feel great upon my submission of the position paper. Now I can work on my research paper full-time. (*-*) I’ve thinking of working on two different short stories. Well, what I have in mind is to do a research on issue about women…. Like writer’s treatment towards women or…. Inequality in female characters... This kind of stuff. I beat; there must be a lot of information on the net to search for... Get my idea ready, and then perhaps if I’m prepared with my information next week, then I can arrange a meeting with Pn. Juridah and ask her to have a look at it… Alright, just wait for my next news. Hope Pn. Juridah has something to comment on. See ya!

Position paper.....

I have prepared outline for my position paper. Altogether, I have four points to support my stand on ‘Edna’s desire for freedom is the reasons for her irrational acts’. An outline to writing a position paper is important as it will determine the flow of the writing process and redirecting us from losing our main purpose of writing the paper. But, still, I felt something missing from this outline… I couldn’t figure out what is it…?? Help…. me!! I think I need to get second person point of view about this... Yes... Chui Kiang……. (She’s wonderful, like to share idea….) I’ll let you know when my outline ready... alright!